Submissions window closing…

As I blogged previously, the Black Library is one of those rare publishers that actually look to give new writers a break. I should know – they gave me one. Their submissions window for 2010 is almost closed now, so you’ve only got about three weeks left before those synopses and summaries have to be in. In my experience, a lot of BL readers also have an interest in writing – you just have to look at the fiction sections of any of the forums (like the Bolthole, for instance) – so it’s great that the opportunities exist. So for anyone still working away on their submissions – good luck, make sure you read the guidelines carefully, and send it in on time!

As for me, I’m still working on getting to the mid-point of my next novel. Making the shift to 40K is interesting. It feels like there’s so much more lore and background detail to get on top of than Fantasy. That’s probably an illusion – I’m just much more familiar with the WHFB setting – but exploring all the gothic goodness of the 41st millennium (or, to be more exact, the 32nd millennium) is a huge, endlessly fascinating experience. At some point in the future I’ll be blogging about the unique challenges of writing for Russ’s feral sons, but for now I’m just keeping my head down and doing it.

In other news, there’s a nice review of Sword of Justice here. Good to read some balanced, thoughtful appraisal – something that’s always useful for an author. The vibe on the forums for the book has been pretty cool so far too. As ever, I’m always up for getting feedback from readers on here, so if you’ve read it and have something to say (good or bad), comment away…

Last call for Bristol signings

Quick reminder that I’ll be in GW Bristol from 12pm on Saturday for a couple of hours. There’ll be copies of Sword of Justice around, and I’ll be happy to talk about that, any of my past stuff, and even some cheeky hints about the upcoming Space Marines Battles project and how it’s going. I’ll be there with the (surely hugely busy) Gav Thorpe, who’ll have copies of Path of the Warrior with him. Hope to see you!

Talking of new releases, BL should be putting a couple of pieces up about the writing of Sword of Justice over the next few days – keep an eye out on the website for more on that. There won’t be any spoilers, but there will be some info about the characters, and the basis of the Warhammer Heroes series.

How to get published by BL

I don’t have a lot to blog about at the moment regarding my own stuff. I’m immersed in all things Space Wolf at the moment, and enjoying every minute of it, but it’s a long time before any of that will see the light of day.

I’ve been thinking for a while about blogging on the craft of writing, and the things I’ve learned since starting out as a neophyte with BL. Gav Thorpe beat me to it, though, and as he’s been at this game a lot longer than me, I reckon it’s best to defer to experience. Good advice on that blog, there.

However, BL have recently changed their submissions policy. It used to be that the only way to get a commission from them was to be hand-picked by their roving talent scouts or win a place in the regular open anthologies. That appears to have changed now – there’s a submissions window for book proposals that currently runs from May to July – for more details, have a look at the guidance on the website.

Since the change, there’s been a fair bit of chat on the forums about what BL are after, and how you might improve your chances of picking up a commission. As someone who’s fairly new to this writing gig, and can still remember those first faltering steps, here are a few thoughts that might prove helpful.


This is the most important bit of a novel proposal. It’s your sales pitch, the bit where you convince your editor that you’ve got something worth pursuing. People seem to get very hot under the collar about this, and there’s a lot of uncertainty about what works here. My advice is to keep it short and snappy – think of it like a newspaper headline: you need to keep the editor interested, and stop him throwing the rest on to the slush pile. Don’t write it ‘in-style’, with all the verbiage you might out into your actual prose – strip it to the bare bones of the story. If you can’t do this in 500 words, are you sure you actually have a decent story? In essence, almost all plots are in pretty much the same format: The Marines Synopticon are really cool because of x, y and z; here’s what happens that places them in massive jeopardy; here’s how they address it using their unique characteristics, and what happens in the end. Try taking your favourite BL novel and giving in the synopsis treatment – what are the really basic story elements?


If you’re pitching a novel, BL are going to need reassurance you can sustain a story over 100,000 words. That means maintaining pace and structure, not letting the action flag, and getting the balance right between jeopardy and pauses for breath. Many fantasy writers got their first bug for writing from massive books like Lord of the Rings. Now, I’m as big a fan of that as the next guy, but it’s a terrible guide to writing tightly-plotted action-based fantasy/SF. If your chapter breakdown has large sections where the heroes are travelling from A to B (albeit with lovely descriptions of the lower Reik valley or the nebulae around the Eye of Terror), then you’re failing. Every chapter should advance the story in some way – there might be a decisive battle, or a revelation about a key character, or a major twist. If each of your chapters takes up a paragraph in the synopsis, think about what’s driving the story in that paragraph. If there’s nothing there except ‘The Marines Synopticon advanced slightly closer to the Planet of Death’, then it’s failing again.


The most important bit. Lots of fan-fic (which I often like a lot) gets this wrong. It assumes that we’re interested in the Marines Synopticon, whereas we’re actually interested in Brother Bolterhead of the Marines Synopticon. Tie-in fiction in the Warhammer world can give the impression it’s about types of warrior or unit. But that’s just the background – it’s characters that readers care about. Over the course of a book, your lead characters should be fully fleshed-out, and they should develop. A great example of this, and so much else, is Helsreach – read that to see how to draw differentiated characters, and how to show their progress as events march on around them. And then read it again, just because it’s awesome.

Technical stuff

Final thing – get your technical stuff right. That’s grammar, spelling, formatting, and fiction conventions. Some might say that this isn’t important, and that a good story can shine through ‘idiosyncratic’ delivery. They’re wrong. Having good grammar won’t ensure a good story, but having bad grammar will ensure a bad one. Learn how dialogue is formatted, how scenes are broken up, how punctuation works. It’s dull, but it’s essential. Only once you’ve got that down can you really start to play with style and find your own voice. That’s as true for your synopsis as it is for the full novel.

So that’s it – my lightning guide to pitching. Some of you might have read some of my books, of course, and seen how far short some of them have been of these goals (What, characters? In Masters of Magic?). Yeah, well, we all take time to learn these lessons. The only hope for any of us is to keep reading and keep working at it. But it’s a lot of fun, so good luck, and keep at it.

Vengeance, in all its forms

Been a good week, this one. I’ve finished the edits for Sword of Vengeance, which has been really enjoyable. The feedback was great, and the ideas thrown up in the editing phase were cool. The second draft will go back tomorrow – I’ll miss writing about Helborg, though it’s always good to see a project draw to a close.

So, what’s next? Well, time to break cover. It’s 40K for me. Space Marine Battles, to be exact; my first novel-length treatment for the Astartes. Gotta say, it’s a pretty daunting prospect. We’re talking the first Battle of the Fang. That’s a whole lot of M32 goodness, a fleet of angry Thousand Sons, a mountain-full of bestial semi-tame Fenrisians, a Great Company of Wolves, a primarch, and a certain very long-lived Dreadnought.

That’s a Big Deal, in a whole lot of different ways. And it’ll keep me busy throughout the summer. Expect a few posts with updates on progress, and thoughts about writing the Sons of Fenris, soon…

Fear the Alien

Finally got round to watching District 9 last week. I’ve been meaning to do this ever since the cinema release, and it’s been nagging away at me for a while. Despite the wait, I’m glad I did. It’s not perfect by any means – the key premise requires significant suspension of disbelief – but the invention, pace and originality more than make up for it. It’s actually got characters, for goodness sake. And it looks great. And it’s funny, and people blow up in amusing ways. All the bases covered, then.

As for me, I’m working on the redraft of a Space Wolves short story and enjoying basking in the shiny glow from my pristine copy of Sword of Justice. I’ll get tired of doing that soon, probably. But not yet.

It’s a weird thing, seeing a book that I finished the main writing phase of last year entering the last stages of production. Writing’s an odd career, in the the real work (for the author) ends months before the product actually hits the shelves. In this case it’s even odder, as I’ve actually finished the first draft of its sequel already. This is currently with the editors at BL, and as ever I’m sitting with sweaty palms, waiting for the feedback. It’s a horrible time, and the small hours of the night are filled with the thought that there’s a gaping plot hole, or a major theme doesn’t work, or it needs to be cut by 20,000 words. Only time will tell…

Writing Space Marines

I’ve been doing a lot of reading lately, and it’s all been Space Marine related. Black Tide, Soul Hunter, Rynn’s World, Salamander, A Thousand Sons and now the second Space Wolf omnibus. All very different books, and all with a different take on how to write the Emperor’s Finest.

Space Marines have changed quite a bit over the years. I remember when they were basically psychos in power armour, drawn from penal colonies and unleashed on humans as often as anything else. They’ve gradually changed to become more noble and less feral. Of course, there are exceptions – the Flesh Tearers are an interesting chapter, as are Nick Kyme’s Marines Malevolent. But the archetype of a marine, taken from the Ultramarine core, has evolved.

As a result, creating Space Marine characters is a more interesting challenge. These guys are superhumans in the universe of 40K, far beyond the comprehension of those they protect. They don’t feel fear, and have an unswerving dedication to their military goals. They don’t fall in love, they don’t suffer anxiety, they don’t worry about philosophy or ethics. At worst, then, they’re going to be pretty boring – just automata in ceramite jackets. Seeing what authors have done to avoid this is interesting. As ever, the compelling characters are the flawed ones, the guys struggling with some weakness or challenge. Space Marines aren’t immune from this kind of thing – in the degenerate universe of 40K there’s plenty of scope to flesh this out. Whether it’s Flesh Tearers battling against their gene-seed flaws or Salamanders struggling with battlefield grief, there’s lots to play with.

So, superhuman and human. That’s the deal. I’m going to be working on this stuff for the next few weeks, and very much looking forward to it. In the meantime, I’m interested in your views on this. What are the most absorbing Space Marine characters in the BL canon? Why?

The best answer wins… the satisfaction of seeing their name immortalised here. Yes, really.

No forum? No problem

So, the new BL site is up. Looking good, I reckon – very clean and professional.

Of course, a lot of internet static has focussed on the loss of the forums. I don’t know what the reason was for this – possibly technical, possibly too time-consuming to monitor – but I can’t say I’m hugely surprised. GW lost its forums a long time ago, and there are plenty of options elsewhere to choose from. A fair few BL authors post over at Pyroriffic’s Black Library Junkies’ Bolthole, so if you miss the old boards you could do worse than head over there. AD-B has also listed some GW-based forums, most of which have some BL content. Definitely worth a look.

In other news, I can’t believe this hasn’t got more attention. I’m excited. Is anyone else? Well?